NAPOWRIMO CONTEST // 30th APRIL 2013 // HOW TO LOSE MY SOUL A HOME

And now our final prompt! Find a shortish poem that you like, and rewrite each line, replacing each word (or as many words as you can) with words that mean the opposite. For example, you might turn “Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?” to “I won’t contrast you with a winter’s night.” Your first draft of this kind of opposite poem will likely need a little polishing, but this is a fun way to respond to a poem you like, while also learning how that poem’s rhetorical strategies really work. (It’s sort of like taking a radio apart and putting it back together, but for poetry). Happy writing!

 

 

 

walking, bleary-eyed

tomorrow

i know well how to lose my soul a home :

wherever fire is thirsty

but water is stone

i never learn

and i’m not convinced anymore

that everybody

and everybody

can make it out there just with love

 

love, full of love

nobody, i say nobody

can make it out there just with love

 

poor people

with money to spend

girls, not women

children, not men

there is no doctor

for their useless souls

and nobody

yes, nobody

can make it out there just with love

 

love, full of love

nobody, i say nobody

can make it out there just with love

 

don’t try to get closer

i won’t tell you what i don’t know

the sky may turn gold

the wind may turn kind

the earth may turn the sea

and i won’t see you anymore

because nobody

and nobody

can make it out there just with love

 

love, full of love

nobody, i say nobody

can make it out there just with love

 

 

 

a.aime

 

(ORIGINAL POEM : ALONE BY MAYA ANGELOU)

http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15624

 

 

 

 

 

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